> Once upon a time there lived three little boys they lived with their mother. They were called Tom, Tim and Stanley. The flat boy was called Stanley. His brothers wanted to be like him but they were fat. One day their mother said they had to move out because they were growing up. Their mum gave them each three pounds to spend at the marvellous shop around the corner it sold lots of magic things to buy. Stanley saved his money to buy a magic unicycle that could fly in the air. When he had saved two hundred pounds he bought the unicycle. He had lots of adventures on it.
Isaac
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Hi Isaac, thank you for your entry this week, I enjoyed reading it. although your story is well written, I couldn’t see this weeks prompt in it ‘….as they turned the corner….’ I also don’t know what a ‘flat boy’ is? Would you like a unicycle?
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