It was a sunny day and there was a big lake with green grass and bushes around it. I was having a picnic next to the lake with my dog called Charlie. I suddenly saw a horse stuck in the mud at the edge of the lake on the other side. I must get there quickly because I could see the horse was getting stressed. Even though I wasn’t a strong swimmer I still swam across the lake. When I reached the other side I found a pipe which I used to carefully dig around the mud. The horse was then freed and it galloped away.
Maddie
You have written a complete story using all the prompt words, Maddie.
I like the detail such as the name of your dog.
You have used good descriptive words such as ‘stressed’.
I am glad there is such a positive outcome.
Well done and keep writing for 100WC!
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